Does the first paragraph and the plot of my story sounds good..?
1st paragraph-
"Its summer, Mrs.rose has roses on her lawn like always". The three children stared at the old woman from the attic window. "She's been doing that since forever", Celine ; the youngest of the three commented.
Not... really. If you're going to do something like that, you most definitely need to fix your spelling and grammar. I personally think the ending was quite obvious (note the spelling for the word "quite"). A lot of the events seem scrambled
The thought of Lady Gaga crooning about buying a puppy to protect her man is a little far-fetched in today's pop culture, but you might be surprised to learn how much of that era still resonates today. In Canada, the Old Age Security Act was introduced
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